Deep Water Evaluation:
After you have had three people comment on your rewrite of "Deep Water," Call Mr. M. to have a conversation about your writing. Please be able to answer the following questions:
__How much dialog did you use?
__ How many people commented on your writing?
__ Which comments did they leave?
__ How did you adjust your writing based on their comments?
__ Are you confident that your writing was better than the example of a 3 score out of 5?
__ Looking at the state's graded examples of 1-5, how would you honestly score your response? In short, which one was more like yours?
__What advice would you give yourself that would have made your writing one of the top scoring answers?
__ When you looked at other people's writing, did most people surpass the sample scored with 3 points?
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